Well, since my “Damania Reverie” webcomic mini series finished yesterday, I thought that I’d do my usual thing of showing off the “work in progress” line art that I scanned whilst making the comic.
If I remember rightly, there weren’t actually that many major dialogue or art changes between the line art and the finished comics in this mini series. The most major one is probably in the “Glass Houses” comic. Originally, Harvey found a large bag of drugs but I decided to change this to counterfeit coins in the final comic both because I thought that this comic update was already a bit too much on the “gloomy and serious” side of things and also because it was a subtle reference to this comic from last year.
The main art changes are the fact that a mirror looks very different in one scene and the fact that, in the second-to-last comic, Harvey imagines the villain carrying a gun.
The main dialogue change is where Derek refers to Harvey’s Jungian “Shadow“. Although this was a more technically accurate description, I had to cut it for length and pacing reasons.
Anyway, here’s the line art. As usual, you can see a larger version of each piece of line art by clicking on it.